Essay`s Tone And Theme
We wanted to give prospective students some essays to look at so they can see what are some examples what are the different styles the tones and themes that are used within these essays and so for the newest set of essays we have few engineers we have some consultants a banker architect and even a few military people so it gives a broad range of the different candidates that are applying as well as some analysis that we put in there to sort of highlight what what techniques these these applicants use to get their message across and as sandy alluded to some are more effective than others and you’ll see let’s talk about this essay this first one inquisitive mentor who is this guy and and how did he write this essay yeah. Find out more about essay`s tone and how it affects your work at Edusson.
So the inquisitive mentor we have an engineer who starts out by talking about a mentor that he had and so through this mentor he learned a lot of life lessons and his appreciation for lifelong learning and then it delves into how that shaped his future goals and so it’s a very standard standard essay nothing that’s very out of the box but it’s good to keep in mind that you know it isn’t essay alone that’s being assessed so so he talked let’s just open this one up he talks about this engineer he met a guy the guy was his mentor the mentor was giving him a lot of advice and then what does he use when he starts talking about himself what examples does he use yeah so we see that he goes through some he has a lot of conversations with this mentor he goes and impacts of life through one-on-one conversations walks walks with the mentor right but at some point the essay has to be about the writer not the mentor is so what evidence from his own life does he throw up and put into the essay so for that aspect we have I have said so the beginning is just the conversation.
I connected up and now he sets it up with how the limits are set the tone and then let’s see become a robot kind of did yeah so I think you see the lifelong learning and that’s continued through when he goes to college yeah so he became inquisitive it became that’s this is so this is this guy’s path to becoming an engineer absolute is the mentor as a set up that’s what set it up yeah and so I mean and that’s what sets it up is that they’re gonna be many engineers that apply okay so as know this guy personally I don’t notice that do you think this si made him sit up straight you think it added an inch or do you think he got into spite this si for this particular one I think it’s good I mean I can’t speak for the admissions board.